count your blessings

count your blessings

A Poem by just take a breath

"we need to fix things" is what you said

but it wasn't "we" who had to fix anything.

it was YOU who, too this place, lead...

to which results lead to nothing.

 

count your blessings, my loved one

when you catch someone you happen to love...

hold on.

 

don't do what you did to me...

don't break another young souls spirit.

because being that hurt...

it shouldn't be a possibility.

 

when you call me up one day

months after this

i will have already moved on.

i will have found somebody new

while you are left with no one.

 

count your blessings, my loved one.

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
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This was a great write! love the title count you blessings!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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