horribly amazing

horribly amazing

A Poem by just take a breath

on a sad, hopeless night

ill wish you were here.

to take me in your arms

to banish all my fear...

or to hide it.

 

the next thing i know

ill hate you and all you live for.

id wish to never talk to you again.

but when you knock, ill open that door...

knowing how big of a mistake it is.

 

there is something about you

your mixed personality

the real person you are... i never knew

your horribly amazing.

i wish i didn't love you.

© 2010 just take a breath


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just take a breath

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OH. MAI. GAWD. wow!!! i love this one too!!! I love the last stanza!! this is so sad...and heart wrenching.

Posted 13 Years Ago


Such a heart tugger and so well written.

Posted 13 Years Ago



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