november

A Poem by just take a breath

"i hate you" i swore

though my words were inaccurate

i would fall again

it has happened before

months went by

eight to be exact

its crazy how time fly's
when your life turns black

so their it ends

when its so cold outside

November...

on one dark, sad night

© 2010 just take a breath

Author's Note

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=november#/d338bzl <--- photo credit

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I LOVE this SO much!!!! It's so melancholy, and deep, and wow. The beginning is the most sincere, as someone below said, but my favorite is the second stanza:

"months went by
eight to be exact
its crazy how time fly's
when your life turns black"

and fly's should be flies. (:

Posted 13 Years Ago

Dani

"i hate you" i swore
though my words were inaccurate
i would fall again

These lines are the most sincere, in my opinion. Great write.

Posted 13 Years Ago

Jami Nicole

This is great. Keep writing. :)

~Love, Jami~

Posted 13 Years Ago

CrashDavis47

interesting keep it up

Posted 13 Years Ago

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Added on December 5, 2010
Last Updated on December 5, 2010

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just take a breath

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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..