barely breathing

im holding onto these last strands

heaving deeply, i called your name

needing you more and more

every second closer the time came

 

as pain clenched my stomach

i seen began to let go

the more the pain grew fierce

the slower the process came

right now im barely breathing

but death will happen one day

Author's Note

http://browse.deviantart.com/?qh=§ion=&q=breathing#/d1xdp2k <--- photo credit

Reviews

[cfix]

Powerful emotion in this piece. Well written

[Jami Nicole]

I got a huge knot inmy stomach as I read this. It's very well written. Great job. :)

~Love, Jami~