i hate you

i hate you

A Poem by just take a breath

ill show you something...

ill tell you my story...

of a man

who broke and tore me.

 

ill start from one detail...

then move to the rest...

color by color

till its the end.

 

i was first in love...

and i thought he was to...

he lied and he shoved

even though i knew.

 

in the back of my head...

it was there, but unreal...

this man that i love...

is a fake

 

i dont know what happened...

not exactly...

 

i wont say im over him...

not now...

but i know that he is gone...

im not kidding around.

 

next time he says to me...

"i love you. you know i do"

ill belive him, at first, i will...

and then ill remember and say...

"i hate you"

© 2010 just take a breath


Author's Note

just take a breath
http://browse.deviantart.com/?q=i%20hate%20you&order=9&offset=24#/di3e55 <--- photo credit

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All they ever do is lie the second they open their mouth... Abusers are liars! Always will be.. great poem

Posted 13 Years Ago


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FREAKING AMAZING!! AND I FREAKING LOVE IT!! That is so damn amazing, and I especially love the ending!!

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 4, 2010
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about me? im 15, im a girl, im blond, and tend to take my feelings out through music and writing. if you knew me, you would know non-believers drive me insane! this includes people that say "your t.. more..

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