the thing about failed love...

the thing about failed love...

A Poem by just take a breath

I fought the fight
I had my moment
Two years of darkness
Stabbed into my back
Like a knife

I dreamed about my fairytale
The first "true love" happiness
Then let down before
The feelings i had could process

But you know what’s so great about being let down?
You get to start all over again


out of all the things in the world

This one happy thing

Can change that frown

Into a smile(:

© 2010 just take a breath


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Great wisdom in this poem. Last line is a fact. After a time. We can allow sadness to fade way and open the door to hope again. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

Posted 13 Years Ago


this is good..

Posted 13 Years Ago


its usually the one who heals the broken heart that ends up being the ONE....love the poem

Posted 13 Years Ago



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Added on December 1, 2010
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