Lip to Lip

Just a poem I wrote about my love of kissing

Her soft pink lips stare at my eyes
I move closer, my lips part
Her lips open, inviting me in
We both moan as our lips touch
My tongue slips past my lips and thru hers
The moistness from each of us mixes
A string of liquid connects us as I pull back
I put my lips together, tasting her on them
It never matters how many times I kiss her,
The pleasure never fades

Reviews

[Amanda Worthington]

I really like it! I love the sensual detail you put in it. I also really like how it's such a simple poem but it also holds so much feeling and truth. It would be nice if every kiss felt like that and every boy returned that kind of feeling!

[Lydia Shutter]

Sensual, sexual, filled with carnal desire. Great imagery. Lydi**

[Jake Donald Stephens]

Ooh. What guy doesn't like this?! Lol.
(Don't be inappropriate, don't be inappropriate....)
Uh, I like this a whole lot. That's all I think I'm at liberty to say, ha ha.
Oh, and I found it very......cheerful, too.
Seriously, very well done. :)

[SonOfPlunder]

I think you might have a future writing erotica here!

[Chris]

Sensuous and inviting... and leaving behind the warmth of remembrance.

[ron]

Very beautiful and sensual. That is how each kiss should be.

[BurgerBopBoop]

Quite the sensual read Kiddo, I like it!

[HeazerH]

That was a very pretty poem. I like how it captures the moment.

[rockgirl]

Thanks :)

[HeazerH]

I literally can not stop reading it.