Lip to Lip

Just a poem I wrote about my love of kissing

Her soft pink lips stare at my eyes
I move closer, my lips part
Her lips open, inviting me in
We both moan as our lips touch
My tongue slips past my lips and thru hers
The moistness from each of us mixes
A string of liquid connects us as I pull back
I put my lips together, tasting her on them
It never matters how many times I kiss her,
The pleasure never fades

Reviews

[John Thomas]

I've kissed a few girls too. And it's true, the pleasure never fades.
Those soft lips, and that string of mixed female saliva.....mmmmmmm.
But even better when it's a kiss on the OTHER lips.
(Oops, is it OK to say that in a review on this site? Lol.)

[writer in trial]

Sounds like a delicious kiss.:D
I love this line esp:
"A string of liquid connects us as I pull back"
Muaah :D

I would like to dedicate a song to you for writing such a tasty poem :D
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=daHjx76do8U
Looking for a kiss by New York Dolls ;)

Well done :)

[BreatheBrittany]

Lovely. The imagery is intense and so realistic. This seems so naughty, almost as if you're doing something wrong- you check to evaluate what's happening, and you find that your heart sings with warmth.

[:o]

Mmmmm, I like this yummy write.

[Kawaiikitty96]

Nice imagery :) I especially love the line, "The pleasure never fades."

[Utkarsh Singh]

ha ha ur poem taught me how to kiss ......gud one ...(y)

[EmmyLu]

Very sensual and erotic. Lovely and intense.

[SquinklaPsyOps]

It could be about a person that found someone that she never gets bored of.

[Mandy Rose]

Great way to put a kiss into words. Loved it!

[Megan]

Oh baby. Lovely write. :3