Kings st. & Alakea

The ever passing moment.

I walk alone, lonely in these streets.
Everyone looks so lovely, but no one
Offers a smile.

I walk alone, but not lonely anymore.
You offered me a smile
It will go with me forever.

But I had the feeling this wouldn't last.
The way she smiled said good night.

The way she waved said good bye,
And with the flick of her wrist

She was gone.



~Edgar Perez

Author's Note

Smile, it can change a life.

Reviews

[Edgar Perez]

This is so true, how many times, I've walked or hiked this path too? people are so introvert, these days, and in them selves... totally off the world, busy in thoughts. This is truly a beautiful poem, Eddy... you show us how soon moments can be over, and we have rare, treasures to hold, fragments, of daily life, until a next moment happens... or not... rich thoughts, I like them so much! thank you for sharing my friend.

- Elisa x

[Edgar Perez]

You are always so on point with my poetry. It's like you understand so well what I am trying to express. There is no doubt a strong connection between me and you exist my dear, friend. Thank you for always feeling and accepting my work. Much love and aloha for you, Eli.