Another shade of green.

Consciousness gives me a reality check.

The wind soars and I am firm...
Firm enough to hit the ground and not
disintegrate in swamp land ground.

But I'll still drown when I see you.

Go your own way.
Make mistakes.
I will be there.

Let the wind soar, you'll be firm

Reviews

[MsJewel]

This poem reminds me of letting go of someone we love....
go your own way
make mistakes
I will be there
..and still we keep them safe in our heart.
Beautifully sweet and touching. I like your style!

:) Julie

[ProCoacoa]

Short and sweet. I really like your writing style.

[Edgar Perez]

Thank you dearly. Your words are greatly appreciated, pro.