4am

4am

A Poem by Edgar Perez
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sleep reality.

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I've dreamt of dreams like these.

Where I wake up and I am the Eiffel tower burning inside the sea.

Shall we set this city a blaze?

I've dreamt of dreams like these.

Where my teeth fall out like type writer keys,

and the mass of people cover the streets,

painting them like black lined thieves,

and stealing our dreams.

Trying so hard

 to remember these things.

Oh I've dreamt of dreams like these.





Edgar Perez.

© 2013 Edgar Perez


Author's Note

Edgar Perez
simple dreams, intersting dreams.

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Very powerful.Short and painted a very vivid picture.One of my favourites.

Posted 10 Years Ago


Do you really dream about things like these?, because if you have trust me you will become a very successful poet. This was simple but with so much meaning

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edgar Perez

11 Years Ago

Thank you so much! and yes, actually I wrote this at 4am. I was at a friends house and that night, I.. read more
I am a dreamer, too. I love to dream...good dreams. Don't let anyone steal your dreams from you.

Nice poem.

Posted 11 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Edgar Perez

11 Years Ago

Thank you! I love dreaming, It's definitely beautiful!
Dhaye

11 Years Ago

You're welcome.

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Edgar Perez
Edgar Perez

Honolulu, HI



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I am Edgar. I am a prose poem writer. I love things. I love people. I love animals. i love you. So smile with me. lets eat words and fill our lives with passion. I am Edgar, enjoy my work.. more..

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