The Moon Is Down, And So Am I.

A few mins of my feels.

She walked away from me like the cold winter, 

And we fell gracefully like leafs... 

Then suddenly, 

we are in sudden sea, 

And I dive in so deeply. 

Our warm bodies freeze over the summer, 

it was a full year of bitter. 

The spring is here and you still recoil 

when we get close.

Edgar Perez.

Author's Note

All reviews are welcome. Good or bad. I'm here to share and read (:

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

A splendid read and write...Thank you for penning and sharing...:)........

[Edgar Perez]

Thank you! your review is dearly appreciated, Sami (:

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:)................

[Edgar Perez]

She sounds to me like the perfect woman..... :) so pure. I loved this little romance, which is too elusive to get.... well done here my friend! xx

[Edgar Perez]

You're too kind! (: truly amazing to be talking to you. lol You're like a super major inspiration. Truly humbled by your reviews! Thank you!

So are you hermano.... keep on penning, being yourself, even 3 months ago lol ;) I saw already so much talent in you! just we didn't met on the right time! I was full of problems, lol, still am, but I try to manage it now better, and be there for my buddy's. as you are xx welcome de nada tesoro

[Edgar Perez]

Elisa! como estas preciosa? I agree, timing wasn't really on our side. I was gong through some really mentally and emotional discomfort at the time and wasn't really social. But I appreciate your honesty, that means a lot to me.

Todo bien aqui :) y contigo? well we share the same thing then.... ;) sometimes, life eat's us alive... time to be social seems then so hard to find (Sigh)... but all is a phase, and we try the best we can... :) happy to have met you.

[Edgar Perez]

Bueno eso me da gusto, pues todo por aquí esta de maravilla, termine la semana de la universidad. voy para la casa! (: ... oh tell me about it!!! there was a point where i just seriously departed myself for about 6 weeks from the world in my room. it was bad!! Empty Sighs And Wine! i totes concur! meeting you was grand! (:

That's great to hear, I hope you can find some rest soon! it must be busy! :)) but wonderful :D
read moreThat's great to hear, I hope you can find some rest soon! it must be busy! :)) but wonderful :D
I can understand what you're saying.... that's terrible :( I hope all is well with you now :) aw, thanks, the feeling is mutual :) my friend.