COLORS

colors of wonder
colors of red
colors of blue
but no colors that could match you

colors of purple
colors of green
even colors                                            I
tried to imagined you as
but not one color matched you

colors of yellow
colors of gold
colors of                                              love
but no colors that could ruin you

colors of black
colors of white
but no colors of plain could match           you

colors of rainbow
the only color you are cause you are everything

Reviews

[Silent_Whispers]

I like the idea of this poem, but i dont quite understand the side phrase of "i love you". I think there's alot more you can say by using stronger using of phrasing. You need to capture your audienced attention. to make them want to read this. I think this poem has great potential to be something great but just need that extra bit of work, like all poems everyone writes. it takes alot of time until its perfected :)

[AndyJCash]

I liked this poem, because it was clever. I mean sure you just said outright rather than clever imagery, but the repetition and structure more than makes up for it in my opinion. It's good!

[ToxicMelody]

This poem is really cute. I just realized the I love you part after I read it and it brought a big smile to my face. Ah, this is good stuff. Thank you for sharing this!