you.

you.

A Poem by Gabby
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no description for this xD

"
their is nothing really how to explain this
except that YOU
liked a two face
human who looked like a fish
when you know i loved you

you tried to make me jealous
it didn't work
oh but you thought it did
until the day you saw me not looking at you
not talking to you
not even waving to you in the hall
liked i use to

then you noticed me with him
talking to him
smiling
laughing
getting revenge

i know it was wrong
but honestly i never EVER got over you
i couldn't stop loving you
your sweet smile
the smell of you
your eyes
your hair
and your personality you cared about everyone

but me.

© 2011 Gabby


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Nice write! I think many of us have been in this situation before which makes it really easy to relate to. I liked how you said "Except that YOU liked a two face human who looked like a fish". That almost brought tears to my eyes because of how funny it was. Keep writing, I really like your work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Nice write! I think many of us have been in this situation before which makes it really easy to relate to. I liked how you said "Except that YOU liked a two face human who looked like a fish". That almost brought tears to my eyes because of how funny it was. Keep writing, I really like your work!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

LOVE IT!

Posted 13 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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