I love you.

I love you.

A Story by Breara
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Decided to tell my boyfriend how I loved him. This was the result.

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I love you because...

...you're adorable. You are the cutest MAN in the world to me.
...you listen to killer amazin' music. It makes me smile when you dedicate a song to me.
...you're oh-so-sweet. I get butterflies every time we talk.
...you're amazingly funny. You can make me laugh, anytime.
...you make me feel safe. Like nothing can harm me.
...you make me feel invincible. With you, I feel like I can do anything.
...you're my best friend. You don't let my past get to you.


-♥-

Everyone searches their whole life for happiness and the one. I wasn't searching for those things when I found you. I was looking for someone to help me rise above the mess that my life was quickly becoming and for someone to just tell me that everything would be alright. I didn't know it then, but what I found with you surpasses everything I've ever wanted. A simple conversation kick-started what has fast become the greatest thing to ever happen to me.

-♥-

This feeling I get when we talk is indescribable . I may not be good with words, but I know that no words can fully explain how happy I am, or how excited I get, or how much love I feel for you. I think the only time that I could be happier, or more excited, or love you even more is when I'm finally in your arms.

-♥-

I love you. I really do. I don't know if I fully deserve you, but I'm grateful whatever higher power there is decided that we should be together.

-♥-I love you.

© 2010 Breara


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When your heart overflows with appreciation like this, you deserve every ounce of the goodness you receive from him. This was lovely. Your structure added to the moaning "aww" factor, and the expressions and reasons for loving him are insurmountable. I hope he smothered you with kisses for this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


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When your heart overflows with appreciation like this, you deserve every ounce of the goodness you receive from him. This was lovely. Your structure added to the moaning "aww" factor, and the expressions and reasons for loving him are insurmountable. I hope he smothered you with kisses for this.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I would feel that doing any true critique to point out any problems would cheapen your point in this. If anything, I would say perhaps the wee little hearts and ellipses were a bit too much/overdramatic - the words should speak for themselves.
Anyways, I'm sure he appreciated this. 'Twas very sweetly written.

Posted 14 Years Ago



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