We Are

Flowing rhythmic short poem written for mi amor.

Moments of bliss are never missed, as we find each others lips in the dark as we kiss.
Your mouth against mine is a feeling too sublime, a sign we must align, shine as one in a divine line -- to be the sole constellation that stands the test of time.
When you speak, I become weak. There’s nothing bleak, as we peek together into our genuine mystique.
Even when we are far, you’re the night as I’m the star, you’re the skin as I’m the scar, you’re the ‘we’ and I’m the ‘are’.

© Rocio Belinda Mendez

Reviews

[TigerSpirit]

Admittedly, the rhythm wasn't the best, but I love the rhyme and how daring you were toward the end. Good job :)

[Nightfeather]

Your amor should feel honored for I would certainly be. Your writing, your flow, your rhythm...They all sink so well, it felt so sweet when I was reading it. Never stop writing, for your talent is too great.

Good job :D

[Simon Pergande]

I loved the rhythm and passion to your work!
My fav line was : ''Your mouth against mine is a feeling too sublime , a sign we must align , shine as one in a divine line--to be the sole constellation that stands the test of time''

[rociobelindamendez]

thanks so much! :)

[Arline]

Very passionate XD Hot hot hot! Good work!

[rociobelindamendez]

XD thank you :) passion is passionate!

[Arline]

Your welcome: )