Let Me Be Your Poem

It's about love, isn't it?

Let me melt the cold pain from your skin, transform into the sun and heat your hurt --so it evaporates into white clouds of hope that inspires the trees to sway.

Let me touch you like the first story I've ever read in brail, after deciding to go deaf before letting another sound replace your voice. 

Let me shatter every tiny ounce of doubt from your being, using the weight of my love for you--to demolish it's once relevant place in your thoughts. 

Let me carve holes in to the night sky, so you can see how my universe revolves solely around you, making the moon shine bright with jealousy. 

Let me fly you to the nearest nebula, so we can finally be as high as this love makes me feel. 

Let me drive you crazy like a mirage in a desolate desert, making you crave it so much you imagine it in front of you, dying for a taste. 

Let me be the sun to warm you and you can be the rain to cool us down, and we can make the sky blush a million different colours. 

Let me be the baseline to your heart's melody, fusing our beats into an eternal anthem of tranquility--played around the world on days it need's love. 

Let me be your poem.


© Rocio Belinda Mendez

Reviews

[DoctorX]

Can I just say that, I think I have fallen in love with this beautiful poem and I can't stop readong this. The way you grasp every emotion into your words and made it as though I was inside the poem itself, leading me to each image that each sentence made and I just am in so much awe.
This is wonderful.
You're an amazing poet.
Although I hope you don't mind me asking but the """" are kinda confusing. Is it supposed to be in the poem? OwO

[rociobelindamendez]

Oh thank you so much! I appreciate that greatly. No! Thank you for letting me know that came up, it was "––" in my writing, I had to edit it. Thank you again :) So happy you liked it x

[DoctorX]

Gosh, you're welcome! Although I think I should be the one saying thank you for reading your poem. x)
It really is marvelous, it just has this power to suck the reader in.
I see, that makes sense xD

[rociobelindamendez]

:D that makes me very happy. Thanks again x

[DoctorX]

You're welcome x)

[Nightfeather]

The emotions that this poem of yours carry has just made my day. For they describe my love for the girl that I Iove perfectly. The way you describe your feelings towards your insignificant other is so sweet that it has made me giggle, and I am a man! Keep writing, for your poems must be enjoyed by everyone on this world, for your poems is what lights the hearts of those whose heart has darkened.

Good job :D

[rociobelindamendez]

Oh my! How sweet of you. I appreciate that, and I'm so glad you feel that kind of love. Thanks so much x

[Nightfeather]

No problem :)

[MinorArt]

Wow. Somebody's got a way with words and imagery! Never have I read anything that helped me visualize love quite so vividly. Your words really came off this phone screen and exploded around me. Never stop writing x

[rociobelindamendez]

Oh my. That made my night! Thank you for that >< I appreciate you reading, and your words x