TO BE

 

There awaiting white sail unfurled

Awaiting winds to set her free

Across wide seas to find new places

Wondrous places never seen

Journey free white masted giant

You tall ship wandering beneath blue sky

Use Stars and Sun to steer course by

Oh sailor traveling upon rolling seas

Return to share your tales with me

In my next life I would like to be

A tall ship wandering drifting free.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Deborah Leah Krempa]

Such a lovely poem, just the thought of being an awesome ship sailing on the ocean with the wind. Beautiful. Thank you for sharing. Debileah

[Michelle Tarnowski]

This is very well done and flows well.

[emz]

what a fab write... i felt very serene when i read this... almost like i was drifting on the great ocean.

perfectly penned



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[T]

Beautifully penned, Rob ...

[KT]

This is probably the best poem I've read on this site. I like it a lot.