GOODBYE

SEEDS

DEEP INSIDE FRUIT

PLUCKED FROM VINE

WASHED THEN SKINNED

PRESSED  THEN AGED 

FOR MANY YEARS

LITTLE SEEDS

DISAPPEARED

NO MORE WINE

FOR YOU

FOR ME

WE DISAGREED

THERE WERE TEARS

AS LITTLE SEEDS

YOU DISAPPEARED

GOODBYE

 

 

 

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Michelle Tarnowski]

What an interesting metaphor for feelings and the transitions that people go through in a marriage or intimate relationship.
My only suggestion would be to prehaps make SEEDS DEEP INSIDE PLUCKED FROM VINE more clear by adding the word fruit or grapes. It would read:
SEEDS DEEP INSIDE fruit PLUCKED FROM VINE
or

SEEDS DEEP INSIDE grapes PLUCKED FROM VINE.

[closed account]

I am not sure if I am getting it right, does this mean you will not have another drink???