I lost You

Smoke bellows

a shy girl

whispers to her friend

a nightmare.

I saw you

one more turn 

the pain unbearable

one time ago.

Remember me

how I remember you

you lost your life

How I wish I were you.

Reviews

very nicely expressed.

[Brittany]

So short, yet it says so much. Sad. Chilling. Emotional. Touching. Thanks for sharing.

[Tasha]

This is a chilling write full of so many emotions. It gave many interpretations, whatever it is you wrote about it beautifully.

[Patient Poet (Yos)]

Thats full of emotions , althouth the words are simple , I can feel there is so much pain behind it ....

[Khal Attero]

This one is pretty simple (obviously) but made think deeply, which I think the poem was ment to do! Beautiful!

[Mr.Allegory]

This is a very chilling & mysterious writing bit.
I read it over multiple times & each time a new interpretation came to mind.
1.) Murder
2.) Suicide
3.) Abortion
4.) Miscarriage

It made me think about all the possibilities. Great word bit~