Happy Birthday

Happy Birthday

A Poem by Heather Clayton

It's my Birthday!!
Yay-yay-yay!!
Presents to open
and wondering what
people are going to
show up in.

The cake has blown
a fuse because of the
number of years
that make me known.

I finally realized 
that another day
might pass, but
this day of mine
is one wish:
to stop time.

© 2012 Heather Clayton


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Is it actually your birthday? If it is, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Haha, I love the humor and the excited atmosphere. I get similar feelings on my birthday as well...which is not too away btw. I could relate quite a lot, with your succinct stanzas and all that happiness we get to share with others. Birthdays are indeed a reminder of how special we are, and how time flies. It was fun to read how you roughly put down all your feelings here. Keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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Yes, it's my Birthday today :O) Thanks

Posted 12 Years Ago


Is it actually your birthday? If it is, HAPPY BIRTHDAY! Haha, I love the humor and the excited atmosphere. I get similar feelings on my birthday as well...which is not too away btw. I could relate quite a lot, with your succinct stanzas and all that happiness we get to share with others. Birthdays are indeed a reminder of how special we are, and how time flies. It was fun to read how you roughly put down all your feelings here. Keep writing.

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

Love it. Especially the blown fuse :-)

Posted 12 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on May 18, 2012
Last Updated on May 22, 2012
Tags: Birthday, presents, cake, wish, time

Author

Heather Clayton
Heather Clayton

Spring, TX



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Hello, I love writing and have quite an imagination. Usually my writings are short stories and also I do some poetry. I'm 35 and I love animals, music and writing/reading. I studied creative writing a.. more..

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