The Review

The Review

A Poem by Robin
"

The forgotten Golden Rule

"
Its crazy to think that it's come to this
When you're no longer reading for love or bliss

When the need to be heard throws caution to the wind
And the feelings of others it what you depend

If you feel that you must have your say
Then say it with kindness cause at the end of the day

We all must purge the anxieties of life
And we need not opinions that cut like a knife

We do not live just for the review
We write what we feel its our point of view

It's our mode of mouth when voice wouldn't do
Then we opened our hearts and shared it with you

© 2013 Robin


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Reviews are also an art form...not all critiques are given with a mean spirit. Speak with the same tone and respect... fairly.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Most excellent and most relevent, too!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Two thumbs up.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Well Done! Keep it up! Do u read mine 2 TIME and She..if possible then gives ur review.. U can also add me on facebook

Posted 11 Years Ago


great piece, robin and i wholeheartedly agree with this message. i really couldn't have said it any better.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Robin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
Great poem, and just how I feel too! I like your line: "It's our mode of mouth when voice wouldn't do..." Nicely done!

Posted 11 Years Ago


Robin

11 Years Ago

Thanks I really appreciate your review
Wow....this poem is great,i think every poet on writterscafe should read it...good work,so true i couldnt agree more.

Posted 11 Years Ago


Robin

11 Years Ago

Thank you very much
deep, powerful and sad,
love the rhyme scheme

Posted 11 Years Ago


nice writing...keep the good work going :-)

Posted 11 Years Ago


Robin

11 Years Ago

Thank you! :-)

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