All Night

"When he never leaves your thoughts. You have it BAD! :-)"

My bones were on fire
My thoughts would not tire
They danced in my mind all night

The feelings I feel, unimaginable
Soft touches, sweet kisses, indescribable
The love I have for you, Undeniable

My feelings bring me to a screeching halt
I must say its your fault
For you danced through my mind all night

Reviews

[Azriel]

wow, i love this one a lot, it's short, yet it says so much. also the imagery used here is quite vivid... really do love how you captured the feeling of someone being in your thoughts all the time... don't think i could have done it any better

[Robin]

Thank you I am so glad you liked it.

[Just Kim]

So very nicely written. love the flow and rhyme scheme

[Robin]

Thank you

[Rita L. Sev]

Your poem illustrates that "can't get you out of my head" feeling very well! I like the choice of using a different rhyme scheme in each stanza; it works for this piece. Good write!

[Robin]

Thank you so much