Two Hearts

Love after pain is the greatest love of all.

Let's create memories
We'll draw deeply inside
No more longing for things
That our hearts have denied

Oh how deeply we fell
In the shortest of time
No more doubts and no fears
Just two hearts that entwined

Let's create memories
It is just what we've done
Filled our lives with desire
As our souls became one

Author's Note

This is not meant to be a piece on love making in the physical sense. It is meant to convey love after pain, when you think you can never be one with another again. When it does happen, let the memories began.

Reviews

[Channele]

Simple and beautiful. That is the definition of good poetry! I liked reading it over and over again. You should totally write a Part II ;)

[Frieda P]

This one flowed effortlessly, sort of like the love you've so sweetly written here, this one opened up the heart right on the page...nice one.

[Chloe]

Let's create memories
We'll draw deeply inside
No more longing for things
That our hearts have denied

Oh how deeply we fell
In the shortest of time
No more doubts and no fears
Just two hearts that entwined

Let's create memories
It is just what we've done
Filled our life with desire
As our souls became one

Wow. I am in LOVE with this. The rhyme scheme is clever, and they (the verses) flow great together. Coolio. :D

[Azriel]

i like this one a lot robin, a lot brighter than your last few pieces( i like them all though). nevertheless i love how hopeful and well joyful this one is...

[Robin]

Awwww thank you so much. You have made my day.

[Azriel]

you're welcome... and glad to hear that.

[KeelyJane]

This was particularly meaningful to me because of some personal relationship troubles I've had recently. Nice flow to this one, as well. Thanks for sharing. :0)

[Rita L. Sev]

Great flow and rhyme in this, and a good way to convey that sense of affection. "just two hearts that entwined" says a lot, simply. Great write!

[Poetic-pRiNcEsS]

Great stuff...u gave me hope,thank you.

[Just Kim]

Very nicely written, like the flow and rhyme.

[Robin]

Thank you so much