AUGUST BUTTERFLIES

End of season...

Jeweled wings are ragged now

The time is almost done

Fairy angels end their lives

Dancing in the sun.

Reviews

[Tate Morgan]

So sorry to hear that you have passed May it not be a dark night but a bright light Like yourself. May you be rocked in the arms of the Almighty to the beat of the lullaby winds.As all the souls of Heaven play a song so kind to the sound of the caroling winds. You have been a great friend to me.You have many great friends who have cried over you. May those tears fall from the heavens like notes from far flung rain to ring out the message you are loved.
Goodnight Marie.

[Seashell]

Goodnight Marie. God bless your weary soul xx

[Tate Morgan]

Babs I saw where a man had left letters to his son because he knew he wouldn't be there for him. To be read each in turn when the time was right. One was for when he lost his virginity, another when he had his first child and when he had a fight with his mother. But one was for the day his mother would die. It was the shortest of all the letters It simply read. "She is mine now." Im sure that is what god is saying of Marie.

[Seashell]

I'm sure Tate ... and as my Mum lies seriously ill at the moment I can appreciate this

[Tate Morgan]

My own father died two months ago So I can understand.

[Seashell]

I know as I sympathised with you then xx

[Tate Morgan]

Seeing a parent pass away is one of the hardest pains we can endure. may you be blessed with a quiet soul

[Monster ^.^]

This is the first time I've heard of this. I'm always thankful to Marie. We haven't really conversed outside of writerscafe, but she made me realize a lot of my potential. Thank you for everything Marie! Will be praying for you

[wordman]

sweet write marie,they just move on to a better place

[Benita-Staebell M - Kin..]

So sad that you've passed
my kind hearted friend you will be missed.

May you rest in peace in the arms
of our holy Father.

You always left such sweet
and kind reviews always
appreciated them
Your poems will be missed
they were so beautiful
from such a beautiful heart
and beautiful soul.

God bless. Benita

[Katie Lynn]

This is a very beautiful poem, cut too short much like the life of the wonderful author. But still incredibly beautiful. It is sad, but may you rest in peace Marie.

[Bright Ocean Star]

Oh, Marie... God bless you and keep you. Your wings are full and vibrant once again. Fly high and fly in the light, my friend. Your reviews were always appreciated. Your poetry is beautiful and everlasting, as you are. God grant eternal rest onto you, dear lady...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

so sad that the life of butterflies must come to an end....they are like beautiful fairies flitting about, making nature that much more beautiful.
But at least they end their lives dancing...many of us wish we could do the same.

[Cassie]

Rest in peace Marie, its as if you knew this would be your last poem. I will miss your poems but I am glad that we can always take a peek and dive in your poetry. Rest well with the angels.

[Will Neill]

It is hard for me to comment on this poem knowing that it was Marie's last but I did on all her others so I will again, I believe that this one speaks for its self in the circle of life.
'chuid eile i síocháin'
Will

[Samuel Dickens]

Like this butterfly, Marie, you've flown in beauty for a time, but now reside beyond the veil. We'll join you there one day, but for now, we'll remember you and enjoy your amazing works.

[Relic]

Their lives are so short. Beauty like that should stay much longer. Excellent poem Marie.