RIVER

Description of a rover.

Swirling dark and deep and slow,

Golden brown and jade you flow

Over rocks and under sky

Nourishing the land nearby

Winding through a bank of weeds

Carrying the living seeds

Home to beaver, trout and bream

Coolness in a forest dream.

Reviews

[Woody]

you definitely are the queen of nature, Marie. gorgeous one!

[Vishuddha]

You know how to say it all in the confines of a poem. Delightful.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

this poem just simply refreshed me....

i felt like i just went for a dip in Mad River up in Vermont.

thank you.

[Marie]

I'm glad you liked it.
One of my favorite books is called "Mad River Road." I wonder if there's any connection?

[jacob erin-cilberto]

wow, i am going to research that...might be the same Mad River.

the water was sooooo cold....

[jacob erin-cilberto]

looked it up...different Mad River...the one in Vermont is in Waitsfield...

Mad River Road is highway in Ohio, i think it said...

[jacob erin-cilberto]

and your poem inspired a poem from me about Mad River...will post soon.

[jeannemarie coulter]

delightful imagery flowing along just like the river

[Marie]

THank you.

[...Relic...]

~You never disappoint with your poems Marie. This speaks in a voice that shares what at first is not seen. Your diction is excellent here.~

[Marie]

Thank you. Coming from you that means a lot.

[jeannemarie coulter]

blessed be to thee