What an extravagant sky of light and color... such fires burning and brilliant... How I wish more people would put everything down and just go out at night to spend moments under these stars... Wondrous, Marie.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
People can't always look at stars; that's why I write about them.
You used very few words in this piece, and yet you've still managed to make an accurate(and beautiful) description of how wonderful and majestic the sky is on the clearest of nights. This poem is every bit as awesome as the picture you have provided to go with it. Fantastic piece! :)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you. My preference is for very short, tightly rhymed, tightly scanned verse.
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