SHORE LINE

The Gulf...

Wild surf

Bronze turf

Gulls land

Gold sand

High tide

Waves ride

Ships pass

Sea grass

Flecked foam

Slides home.

Reviews

[Gaston Villanueva]

With 20 words you painted a vivid picture of the ideal shore line
I like the simplicity of this Marie

[Marie]

Thank you. These "simple" poems are not as easy as you would think.

[Dr. Wood ?]

ahhhh great last 2 lines.......Coastline NOT so golden and blue here but the concept is the same

[Marie]

I haven't seen a coastline myself in 10 years.

[Dr. Wood ?]

I remember you saying as much before...As you know. I live by the sea....Do not know for how long though..we may move back in a few years to be closer to family

[...Relic...]

No words wasted here Marie. Perfect description with only a few words. Excellent! :)