I don't think anyone who reads your work can leave without reviewing it.
Today's night is worth spending reading such powerful works! I loved it again :)
You are such an inspirational and amazing writer :) #Respect
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
THank you. I do not think of myself as a poet, but a verse writer.
Finding worth in things that don't rust will make us find true happiness. I really like the picture. It matches the idea of being adorned in gold by the maker.
This is lyrically superb and truly spiritual in content and the tone - it could be a hymn Im reading.
The phrasing is so beautifully done that the reader floats along with it.
Well written my friend.
:)
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Thank you.I don't write music, but I suppose this could work up into a hymn.
what greater wealth than the love of God and peace of mind?
sumptuous write.
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
I don't know. Many people want more. I seem to be getting a lot of comments on this particular poem,.. read moreI don't know. Many people want more. I seem to be getting a lot of comments on this particular poem, which I certainly did not expect.
The greatest treasure--a vibrant, loving relationship with The Creator.
Those rich in things probably don't know enough to envy you.
Two incredibly beautiful stanzas, Marie!
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
Well, He has blessed all of us with treasure, if we only reach for it.
I have been writing for almost 60 years. Writers' Cafe is the best writing site I've found. If you send me read requests, expect me to be blunt. I don't like poor grammar, misspelled words or mistake.. more..