I don't think anyone who reads your work can leave without reviewing it.
Today's night is worth spending reading such powerful works! I loved it again :)
You are such an inspirational and amazing writer :) #Respect
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
THank you. I do not think of myself as a poet, but a verse writer.
Finding worth in things that don't rust will make us find true happiness. I really like the picture. It matches the idea of being adorned in gold by the maker.
This is lyrically superb and truly spiritual in content and the tone - it could be a hymn Im reading.
The phrasing is so beautifully done that the reader floats along with it.
Well written my friend.
:)
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Thank you.I don't write music, but I suppose this could work up into a hymn.
what greater wealth than the love of God and peace of mind?
sumptuous write.
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
I don't know. Many people want more. I seem to be getting a lot of comments on this particular poem,.. read moreI don't know. Many people want more. I seem to be getting a lot of comments on this particular poem, which I certainly did not expect.
The greatest treasure--a vibrant, loving relationship with The Creator.
Those rich in things probably don't know enough to envy you.
Two incredibly beautiful stanzas, Marie!
Posted 9 Years Ago
9 Years Ago
Well, He has blessed all of us with treasure, if we only reach for it.
I have been writing for almost 60 years. Writers' Cafe is the best writing site I've found. If you send me read requests, expect me to be blunt. I don't like poor grammar, misspelled words or mistake.. more..