SUMMER NIGHT

SUMMER NIGHT

A Poem by Marie
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THEME FOR A SUMMER NIGHT

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Slashed stars

White scars

Hot light

Steel bright

Black sky

Burnt dry

Whiplash

Heat flash

Red moon

Rain soon

© 2015 Marie


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seems like summer to me ............

Posted 9 Years Ago


Marie

9 Years Ago

Well, it's not summer yet, but soon, I hhope. In Florida it may be summer, of course.
Stellar word choice; reading aloud sounds a lot like elegant rap lyrics.
Truly exquisite, Marie!

Posted 9 Years Ago


Marie

9 Years Ago

Thanks. These two-word rhythmetic lines are a real challenge for me. Something different than my usu.. read more

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Added on February 25, 2015
Last Updated on February 25, 2015
Tags: rain, moon, white, steel

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Marie
Marie

San Antonio, TX



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