CREATION

Creation of the world.

      CREATION

With His feet

God measured out the valleys;

With His hands carved

Mountain tops from stone.

 

Through His lips

He spread the breath of life.

With His love

God made the earth His own.

Reviews

[Workvio]

Ahh, a refreshingly beautiful write that says about all there is to say in very few, well written, words ... Lovely ...

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Woody]

in two little stanzas, you summed up the creation of the world. love it.
the last two lines are sublime.

[Marie]

Thanks. I don't think it happened wuite that way...

[Beccy]

Such beauty he created; from the tiniest of little flowers to the majesty of the snow capped mountains. We have so much to be thankful for; if only we could live up to the ideal.

Beccy.

[Marie]

That's true; we seem to waste the creation we were given.

[Satan]

And when will he make the worlds pain go away?

[Marie]

The sun will go out eventually, so that will be the end of the earth; humankind won't last that long. I don't know about the rest of the universe.

[Relic]

Beautifully done Marie. I love poems similar to this.

[Marie]

THanks. YOu know this is the kind of poem I do best.

[Michael G.]

This is very lovely Marie. And He did all that, so easily.
I really like your pictures, also. I've seen similar flowers at the Biltmore Estate, just outside of Asheville, N. C.

[Marie]

Thank you. I got the picture off the Internet; probably not the Biltmore Estate.

[Michael G.]

Regardless of its origin, they are lovely.

[Jimmy Yetts]

One Creation scenario I can get behind: The Big Guy personally fashioned everything.
A lovely bit of work, Marie!

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Jamestown]

Amen!!! Awesome piece, I love it!!!
I hope you check out my piece divine communication:)
This is fantastic, thanks for sharing and b-blessed!

[Marie]

THank you. I will check our your poem.