FOREST IMPRESSIONS

Forest images...

Dark shade

Green glade

Dim light

Bird flight

Squirrels pass

Soft grass

Brown deer

No fear

Smooth streams

Slow dreams.

Reviews

[~]

A great poem to get lost into.. the soothing color and rhythm of the piece smooths away all the fears.

[ANTO]

This transported me Marie - Almost every line is a superb image in its own right. An escape from the madness of everyday living. I really immersed myself in this and I appreciate that.
Write on dear friend.

[Marie]

Thanks ANTO. THese little two word line things are really a lot of fun to do.

[ANTO]

Thats the point Marie - if its no longer fun - why do it I guess?
Yes the fun came across :D

[Angi]

This piece is like a deep breath. There are not many places near me that offer each of these things. That makes me sad, Marie. Nice little snippet. Angi~

[Marie]

THanks Angi. I don'thae any forests near me either.

[An owl on the moon]

This for me is a glimpse of heaven.. the sights and sounds.. the escape from the restlessness of the world.. this sweet forest of Eden found wandering in your words...

[Marie]

Thank you; I'm glad you enjoyed it.

[Carol Phelan Aebby]

A beautiful, peaceful write. Simplicity in writing has to go through complexity of thought, and comes with wisdom. I can feel nature vibrating from your pen to my heart.

Wishing you continuous creativity and bliss!

With respect and smiles,
Carol Phelan Aebby

[Marie]

Thank you very much. I fear my thoughts are not really complex.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

You are the master of giving such accuratly detailed descriptions while use using few words.

[Marie]

Thank you.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Portrays and conveys a profoundly peaceful mood.
Reading "Forest Impressions" is a lovely, effective way of bringing down the blood pressure--something I need several times a day.
Recommended reading!

[Marie]

Thank you. There must be a name for this form of poetry, but I don't know what it is. It's fun to write.

[Jamestown]

Fabulous piece of work, short, sweet and great,thanks for sharing. PTL!

[Marie]

I'm glad you liked it.