BEACH FUN

Memories of summer...

Palm trees

Cool breeze

Soft spray

White bay

Warm sand

Skin tanned

Blue sky

Gulls high

Bright sun

Beach fun.

Reviews

[W R Stowe]

Picture is awesome.Short great rhyme and flow well said.I remember the beach from my youth,but not as beautiful as the Baloy beach in Cubic Bay Philippines where my wife is from.While standing in water 5 feet deep I can see my toes unlike Lake Erie here at home.

[Marie]

Thank you. People here seem to have know such beautiful beaches. I never got any further than the Gulf Cost.

[W R Stowe]

The Gulf Coast is south of California I think.The Pacific Ocean is awesome. I love the west coast sunsets.Your quite welcome God bless.

[W R Stowe]

Would you mind if I use this photo for a poem of my own?

[Marie]

No, go ahead. I got it off the Internet.

[W R Stowe]

thank you much

[Kasey Miriam]

This poem instantly takes my mind to the Bahamas. That was the prettiest beach I've ever been on. I yearn to go back and scuba there.
Brilliant to the point poem.

[Marie]

It sounds wonderful. I'm glad you liked the poem.

[Frank]

Short and sweet
tight and neat
list poem by any
other name
just the same

Very good. Synthesis for a longer work, or maybe an advertising campaign for Florida

[Marie]

Well thanks. I was thinking about the Gulf coast.

[Frank]

It certainly has impact, good for show-piece for that coast. Well done!

[Paper Forks]

Beaches are fun and relaxing. B*****s are just rude and annoying.

[ANTO]

Wow - I could starfish all day out in that lovely sun flared sea.
These are the basic ingredients for a chilled out holiday - they're all we need.
Thanks for this Marie.

[Baby Ricochet]

The beaches here are marvelous and this time of year very crowded

[Marie]

Everyone should live in Florida...

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

Damn I want to throw on my flip flops now and head to Santa Cruz.

[Marie]

That sounds nice...

[Gee]

And that Mary is my ideal summer break in a few words.Thank you.

[Jimmy Yetts]

Am more than ready for this kind of fun!
Your lovely, well-chosen words instantly brought it all alive, good poetess.
Potent little mood-changer!

[Marie]

In July I will probably be writing about snow...