SNOW

I think this is what it looks like, anyhow...

 

Sprinkled sparkle, silver bright,

Curtain dropped in pearls of light.

Reviews

[Cryingkate]

Here is one I didn't see before, thinking of you Marie, Thinking of you and your family..
Missing You..

[David O Whalen (O Haol..]

Me likee Marie! (and I know snow: Kentucky, Utah and Ohio and 20 below!)

[Marie]

I can't even deal with ice, which is what we may have tomorrow...

[Lizardo]

Short, Consist, and very well writen, and can't describe this better
really good and enjoyable poem

[Matching Socks]

An enchanting scene Marie. It's cold but from the inside looking out, it's a beauty.

[Samuel Dickens]

It's beautiful, Marie, but you may need to move north.

[Marie]

Oh no. THe Southwest is where I make my home.

[Will Neill]

Marie,believe me snow is only nice when you are looking at it from a nice warm armchair.your discription was perfect.
Will

[Marie]

THanks. My late husband was from Canada; he had nothing particularly good to say about snow.

[scribblingsylvia]

I like the alliteration in the first line, but I think the second line is more original.

[Marie]

Thank you. I'm afraid none of my work is particlularly original.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i can't believe how much beauty you can pack into two lines.

the consonance is amazing...

as chilly as these words could be, they warm my heart on this cold night here in carbondale.

[Marie]

Thank you. I am filling the chill right now.

[The Rock And Roll Cowbo..]

WOW. short but beautiful work.

[Moonie]

Stuck in blizzards of white,
Snowflakes shine in solo flight.

--hmm, not sure if it sounds good, but I wanted to write a tribute poem after reading that piece..:)

[Marie]

I would change the words just a bit to read: Snowflakes in blizzards of white/ Shining in solo flight.