Snooze

The snooze button

lying on a cloud, soft and warm,

woman around me, in a swarm, 

they dance around me, getting nude,

then the awakening, harsh and rude.

BUZZ BUZZ BUZZ 

it shrieks in an attempt to awaken,

all of a sudden, i was forsaken,

back to hell, 6:45

start to wish i was not alive.

Pressing snooze, i close my eyes,

drifting back to the clear blue skies, 

i sit down and crack a beer,

but then again my greatest fear.

i press again, again, again,

but i cant avoid this pain, 

i just cant win, i have to rise

and face the job that i despise. 

Reviews

[SydneyLK]

This made me laugh!
Very good job, I know exactly what you're talking about here, something I fight with every morning.
Also, good job working with a set rhyme scheme, I personally have a hard time doing that, but you've pulled it off quite nicely.

[robing123456]

thanks for the comment

[AWickedMoon]

Ha-ha! Love it you seem to have a knack for quite amusing poetry. :)
100/100

[robing123456]

thats the best mark i ever received! thanks

[AWickedMoon]

Any time ;)