A Work In Progress,

Prayer Poem

Dear Heavenly Father
It is me again
Thank you for being my friend
I come tonight
Not because me nor my Wife
No friend is sick
No funds I need
No troubles are bothering me

Lord
It is you
Who brings me to my knees
Because you are constantly
Giving to me
You have called
And at times I have failed
But yet, you have never, ever bailed


Lord
I want to serve
And obey your Call
I want to glorify you
With my all
I wish to wake
With this mission in mind
Before anything can fog my mortal mind

Lord
It is you that I want to serve
Not this life
Or my master at work
For you have shown
That you are true
And now
Dear Lord
I want to be like you

By

Rob-Jr (All Right Reserved)
2008/1/3

Reviews

[Danny J.H.]

Very deep a poem that expresses it's something that shows who you are.

[After the Blackbird Sin..]

I admire your faith here. This is obviously a very personal poem, so thanks for sharing.

You've kinda written a rhyming essay. Give me something to imagine, word pictures and such. And some better rhythm maybe.