THOUGHT FILLED HOURS

through thought filled hours, in-through-out 

the forest as white as wings changes how-to glide

the sun is declining as-like

one glorious gush in this backwards world

you could so true the cool, clear, blue, blue fire

upon the heavens above

takes me on your flight

and not so far away

is a place of, reminiscence of,

that has become filled

shared in a love, does, in a mess, sighs, cries out

always newly preconcieved upon my thoughts

borne inside the wind free dares

the beautiful dream

of a peaceful scene

 

wheresoever you are and i first got started

oh, all we did, we delighted

as-like we just met in the yesterday

walking, talking

the beginings with the whispered wind

is whistling by and i am happy

is of a sensation

of Heaven, coming, way far down

until, gets a glimpse laying upon the passing clouds 

close to earth

through a beautiful, peaceful

wonderful place, we knew

return from yesterday

i'm reaching for you

through thought filled hours, in-through-out

the forest as white as wings changes how-to glide

the sun is declining as-like

one glorious gush in this backwards world 

you could journeying inwards across mostly

by our souls to be free  

takes me on your flight 

and, as, i walked 

each step i take, will raise 

those yesterdays

long, long, by, by, just gone

Reviews

[Kathy Van Kurin]

Robert Robbie Dudley,
This almost feels like the rise and fall of human experience, within the seasons of nature."Thought filled hours, in through out.: third stanza "always newly pre conceived upon my thoughts" 4th stanza "beginnings within the whispering winds I have a little trouble connecting the meanings but it feels more then says and it connects because of it. I read it through like four times because of the emotion behind it. Dont know how to explain exactly. It would be neat to hear your take. thanks for this opportunity to analyze. I love to by the way! kathy