When the sun shines in the garden returning to dusk

O within this notes go finer to throw rolls & psalms
how they so pines for thee way
Designs form
& lo to stars
So as to leaves stay'd per each constellations
& airwaves go
Lets out my lines abouts a-light
Levels off-on
& stretch'd tight,
O my spade wants joy to plant sunflowers.
So distant & bright follows your page & will chill,
From elegant we caught ourselves in thoughts gets
Still any bits is smooth of glass at all,
breadth & even wine spills.
Beyond measures up thru endless & O'
Here's to a-pet rock,
Sunny day into that garden experience.
A-calm field freely made it alive
maybe, or, certain;
Don't grasp delight be
As it is will thrill
more than closer gets
I am a-pan soarin'
As the bricks sets in heat
& unpuzzles we muddles thru
Recalls once more s-warm dawn

Reviews

[Red Brick Keshner]

This note on those notes that these notes pertain a longing and pining for leaves to stay (stuck to their twigs or stay on the ground that they have fallen on) in the meanwhile planting row by row so flowers could grow. The bits that are smooth until arriving at what is endless. The setting bricks bring a feeling of permanence and finality.

[Robert Robbie Lord Dudley]

Yes. Indeedy construciively we process and thence continue on
Well is done
Inside your likeable poem greatly I thank thee

[Bivita]

Short and sweet poem. Nice!

[Robert Robbie Lord Dudley]

Yes thank you i try so to short and defend my sweetness
Have a nice morning

[Bivita]

Have a good day!

[Sami Khalil]

"Sunny day into that garden experience"
I had an experience reading sone good natural thoughts with unique clarity.

[KAREN]

Well written, and nicely penned!