When A Call To The Heart Calls Out More

There-in between two 

A World unkempt,  concepts new 

But I do feel like one

For less what matters now

For more is what 

Really happened here

The good and the terrible mark

Will you starve in a dark time 

In the morning like a breeze

There is such a thing,  ain't that so

I think I have to go branch broke

An inspiration and myself

Empty plates at the table

Ohh,  of both,  at best

Is to one's own fustration worser

All's getting harder,  most closer 

Gone astray gone away seeks further

All's looking only forwards

Making another chance

And you're flying back towards me 

Going around and around clearer pictures

Understanding,  spinning

Rolling on legs of spider webs

Seems like years ago 

That wasn't all over 

Aslike the last time 

And then the next few days 

Has bygones,  become

One cool thing 

Sharpness bursting through the mist

As a way of life

The most sat dangling

You're parked

Things, we're in a-hurry

Planting their-selves

Or standing in the gentle rain

I never saw'd,  what's from many aways

The sky shakes its breathing

Always free,  amongst us

For beautiful sounds is a question mark now

Although,  yeah,  I can see

In the shimmering stars 

A lot of all things bright

Of exclamation points,  I felt its pain

Then,  by those dark notes 

From far away falls

Not so sure where-abouts

When a call to the heart calls out more

Still are waters and stars in the sky blue

Atop there in a tree 

Following,  searching 

On the lost vision

Around on the edges 

Spent in amazement

Melting it down was as today 

Candles blowing them out 

One by one now a storm

Inside the common core

I'm outta here without building 

Around,  where-abouts

So think heavy-lighter-dark-brighter

On the subversive 

A painted box

Past dreams,  poems as logic

Started swelling of problems

Like frozen streams

Wherefore,  therefore  

Let's just.. to go,  feeling toward 

Yes,  yes;   We didn't even have 

The wind behind us 

Looks,  then knocks on wood twice

Ohh,  what arises out

And lifts up above 

Atop there in a tree 

Following,  searching

And later,  can be said of it

If the doorbell is chiming 

Turns evermore so red and yellow hills

But at least passing, rising up

Into the green grass walks 

The glint of white snow

T'was instantly calm as one

Greater,  lesser than to this very step 

Although,  yeah,  I can see 

The sound of rain is around me 

Meanings behind your eyes true 

Without shadows of the ends 

Off the sounds of your days out & in shinning on

When a call to the heart calls out more

Are still waters and stars in the sky blue

When-so lit' something comprehends 

To catch,  you dropt

Like pens kept mine gone

I found amongst thee others

Underneath me this trails off better 

Of course it will bend backwards

All fired up on line

When a call to the heart calls out more

Still are waters and stars in the sky blue

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