Brought Up To The Water Ripples

thinking over

a-blur together

I'm blending in

there's more

been better

as from afar

many belong

in what was said

deep shock

lightning

moving across

catches our eyes that dance

blissfully

enraptured

in the branches

on wires memory

energy brought up wells

to the water ripples

against the dark

I can see

up there over me

stars gazing wherefore

art though it hurt

seen around

on rocks

down to earth

then to life beyond

my dreams

my aims

ain't it situations

understands

never ends

what means that

red shapes to me

or any color brightest

I don't mind mysteries

found in darkness

that passes around us

and sweet by and by

was always

a-different look

where-by inside

the fair light

I'm to yonder

yonder hill

window-frame flown

as from home

without discard

O' breathe

O' conquer

over comprehension

is not memorization

forget the memories

was it to well set me free spaces

hello bumblebee all abuzz focus

expect today's roses

to be small

be careful verse, prose

beholden in open air

to take you

on places, me

O' it's most

O' nothing can

I lost my composition

something on your clouds puffs out worlds

my writing was flawed rakes down

you're a little

too late

last chance fountains

let's go ahead

slipping by

and falling fast

as from beneath

on the hard bench

birds in the marble park

as from those

broken arrows starts

of stories very close

it's my heart

side by side

and how many above

stumble over each word

mine in this angels overlooks

thru woods to floors

often in marks

on other worlds

on other levels

running up hills

quick to put through

the darkness

I'm still here

to what should be

ready for thought

removes all

separating the question

of new leaves

at last seen

steady stream

those around loose sand

thinking over

a-blur together

enraptured

in the branches

I had seen through this

there's more

in this a-lot spins

those around loose sand

microscopicly moving

all's gone forward poems

and I darkened

inside crumbles

to avoid who, us

had you known

you knew

the rain falls unknown

expresses how

a-piece of it rolls down

without energy to hold 

brought up wells

to the water ripples

instructions

in my converses hits

like I never better had it

almost begotten me

a-dawn before

shining today

was bright on wires thought

high-tops right here

to stay it's my heart

releases tides

alone at times

all laced up I got it glorious in mind

wonders under the solid moon

that escaped my room lights was

slant after midnight why so low

a special star empty

has also me too chooses dreams

befell quite hard

hits by a-gust of wind

forward poems

all's I got is this box

it grows

gone without worries

why not, awhiles can wait

I left it up

broken off

unfallen away

within leaves

in energy seen

through ripples

there's more dawns

nature's still anew

thinking over

a-blur together
we felt forward

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Reviews

[Lorne Blaine]

I'm confused, yet I believe the pace should have this effect on the reader. If so, you did a great job and, regardless, I like it.