Time Is A Lazy Sway

they say nay

cool don't look

to and from

time is a lazy sway

beyond was appearance

alights afoot among brooks

time is a lazy sway

attention came

roughly thier wild universe

hazy worn real

crazy for you

I send it, I find it

seen inside a deep dirt dark

leaf just fell

with my head up high

days, stairways

no regrets

straight down

elevates in there

in and out

shelves to land

in an insight

at both feet can

escapes in the dust

to this little effect

illuminated

causes swiftly goes

we noted looming

looking out

at the colors cloudy

restoring thinking

feeling more alike a-blotch

for what's

in an drain, in an end

in an finish

I can see gives ways also paths

no shadows

the brightest lines

of mountains

ever shows

blindness there

what's lost

by moonlight longing again

in the middle

oh, where

oh, whereabouts how

I never knew

we're facing the wind by throes aside

my movements slower

on lots invisible

it could be

or not be

lost in the melody

of a-morning song

from this is

to be promises

within choices

& out there is

voices & visions

within teardrops

on the pages

within raindrops

scatter'd

on the windows

I don't know stuff

don't ask me

all's a lost book

I call it this

for the facts

my standing on a box

freedom

your accumulation of misfits

to this I live all right be

might be so

I don't dislike

other times

positive

negative in

mistreated shells homes

behind curtains

upon the loops

now my own insides

thrown topsides

downward underfoot

sure at doorways

here at pathways facts

figuers out a poem

that never ends

no directions

to furnish it on

carries this along

petals flying off

the surface loud

noisy wings now

speaking

sprinkling

shouting how?

whispers back

humming

no words plain

on two clouds

misty blooms

surrounding us took

suggestive

ways over lips

as we is the best cake yet

gentleness

listens no breeze thru

listens no pails part two

hanging out

for your foresight clears

facing it first

past almost midnight reads

I overheard

no words plain

something

incoherent

the spirit of it

the spirit of place

into my vision

can I get pass it

how very soonish

it's over-alls

there I am

getting deeper

where I am

traveling on

in the dark days shrouds it

in this hood

they say nay

cool don't look

to and from

time is a lazy sway

maybe for another leap this year

oh, & kiss aways harder lips are

time is a lazy sway

I'll see clearer so

Reviews

[alanwgraham]

Very good - it delivers a mood well. I enjoyed the flow of words without dwelling too much on any meaning. I must admit when I got to to line 'a poem that never ends' I took fright but it did end soonish. I think your structure of short snappy lines works well for the lazy sway.
Well done, Alan
If you have a chance would you like to check out my poem 'Apocalypse now' - on page 3 Thanks