SWEET DREAMS SWEET-HEART

Oo bring in or out to the breezes

What I wants

sweet dreams sweet-heart

to releases in between

winds, places, for a while

in those flying clouds

i want you to see

in those special requests Oo we are 

senses of feelings

that absorbs, that adds

that pleases me after you

coincides in the calmness

once inside by

the light house shining

or the quiet within, erases

confides after

the flame lowers

after the talk, that, has, shined on

Oo the roses and the tulips

and orchids bright

of hot red and more

Oo the power

in hearts untamed 

is right out aways upon

the flickering lights

over our heads

from the shut porch door slamming

comes unhinged

mouths of meanings

of windows

and roads widely open

and hanging shoes

rock-on steady 

unsteady stones might fly over

at a time like this

so many words

so many moments  

Oo don't wait i'm finished

getting loose

upon the sound

so many words

so many moments

let me hear you

laugh with me

disclaiming to the sky

cordless has us

astonishing

in your's with mine

one long wind

one long rain

one long cool taste

of water clear

in the cool clear air i'm feeling

Oo rain again

in sheets again

and bloom eventually a flower

that we would not

throw away

hey! you on the phone

see! this garden

and the prize inside it

connecting us

so compeled

so intertwined

i can't tell

was it just for

your re-action

on a vine, on a path lit

Oo don't wait i'm finished

i'm loving it in

so many words

so many moments

getting loose

upon the sound

let me hear you

laugh with me

disclaiming to the sky

cordless has us

astonishing

in your's with mine

so excellent

has us gone through

in the stillness

of a very nice poem

you will know

Oo what to list 

on a vine, on a path lit 

very close

very tangled

and touching together

Oo the roses and the tulips

and the orchids bright

of hot red and more

Oo the power

in hearts untamed

what do you mean?

Reviews

[Sami Khalil]

"rain again

in sheets again

and bloom a flower

that we would not throw away

on this garden so excellent

into the stillness"

A very nice poem. I like it alot...:).......................