SOMETIMES FINDING IN WAVES SAD

slightly better see

be a poet

not fully that could be

i know it

 

i don't i'm very far apart

not so much now i'm rapidly walking glowing

true true heart is out of air

composition getting there where are you going

 

through and through

rough within without

a-product outside is next make it beautiful 

off edges i reach

 

i fly-a-way far away

spirit never can tell it

nothing because 

things check me out

 

mountains and caves

forest stirring senses

for that is the best as i believes

been branded without memory of a memory

 

holds on by lines of fables don't forget

almost unto O' desert trail O' chance known 

been shaded thristy for another flood

with world on purpose

 

never sure i followed out

in a strange day

another paradise

it's going good although

 

i tried to stay

in sky

in air

swim holes in shoes by twos widening gazing

 

comes along passes holds onto by only Saga's door stops

pokes along in O' most wonderful puddles

a flower bush i caught

O' changes still became are same

 

a fish

a feather

a rabbit

at rest

 

does enable above

somewhere below

nonsensical 

sometimes that

 

on a wooden blue dome boxes

on a wooden blue bridge disguises

watching passing walking over to see

at each moment spent

the dusk on the blue lagunes brung colorful somber

 

horizon's lost time  

still became opening eyes

boyhood letters

binding edges

 

as love as dreams good for

breadcrumbs or birds to read

on paths outside last times

doesn't exists or don't know where it is

 

i'm feeling everso inclined

there underneath a little drop enclosed 

above gave that for joy you all to see

on thee farewell to a weeping side

 

carried easy

very well

i forgot isn't it not on this 

a certain need some ends

 

on odds 

whole tree

through and through

as it will outlast even me

 

on each limb climbs scrambles around blew thru

to long dust

true true heart is out of air

whole life

 

through and through upon frames times 

to count on boxes bricks birds 

as well go by waving walking dreaming 

sometimes in up-words

 

down-words twirling

sometimes wants so

hidden values serene and silent pictures

'O don't stop talking what's your story here hurry

 

still became set to abstact in pain

sad love so lovely 

is indeed

a masterpiece spinning faster looking darker

 

of Conifers, Maples

is forever glad i deplore for 

of foliage

forever glad but it poured hard

 

has it relief at

in dark and stormy nights confirms me

i forget is now over yet

sometimes linger 

 

between ain't too much inside found mine

doesn't recongize or don't know where it is

comprehension getting there

doesn't care but why wonder may-be so

 

as free as midnights we went for

sometimes at a breeze

dense i met the sunset there

access will i ever get

 

demise it is

absolutely do so

insides lost unfinished

not fully that could be

 

see you in outer-space see you in the dark

see you on the grass turning the night

see you reading big into stars bright it was cosmic 

the words of more ease

 

from a faraway place

i remember around

here-abouts underneath

in a blue moon

 

in a blue pool reflects

into the dusk on the blue lagunes

horizon's lost time

let's go moving things thought now

 

that's ok won't worry you

on the fork from on the road i found out 

i already knew in short

no directions

 

sometimes nowhere

up on the top both a slow log also hallow rolls 

oh and would tomorrow be  

to anything stills become O' chance known 

 

in a strange day

another paradise in a

strange moment it's all arranged

it's all deranged

 

of massive confusion stretches a corner remade it

be quiet no sweet noises from meanings 

like moon unglued

unto blue the skies to you clouds up partly

 

sometimes to me it's clearer explore my life now

sometimes comes along passes holds onto by only Saga's door starts

sometimes in part awaiting my heart again

sometimes learn it slow

 

sometimes burn it low

sometimes somehow it does heal me anyhow

sometimes the fingernails in coal black

sometimes digging and i ran so alike an underground river 

 

sometimes through and through i dig it too 

open handle broke away to sights i see 

holds a-sweet sound of quite a fall i had but i didn't hear anything 

at all no-body knows reminding just me 

 

sometimes in a dark place

sometimes where blue crows go deep to stepping stones shining

sometimes of darkest night

somethings aren't never told and so it goes on 

 

sometimes in harkness covers me covers you

sometimes onto all ways as comets cometh over nearer to thee

sometimes becomes nothing to nothing

sometimes of brightest day

 

sometimes what dawn over me

sometimes more real stars

sometimes then i can see it a kite a surface wind's someplace

sometimes it's in reality's lost time

 

sometimes finds in waves sad almost tastes full

sometimes without walls within shaking all scattered

sometimes very time

to some places can be else-wheres before me

 

sometimes in up-words

sometimes down-words twirling

finding right words in eyes remarkable pretending to stand

way they can help way they can hurt 

 

sometimes it's neat

sometimes patterns new lines 

sometimes my sight be dim blurry 

sometimes my strong feet will see 

 

sometimes O' changes known still became are same

sometimes never done unfulfilled

sometimes it takes us or it gets us you and me 

sometimes from heart

 

sometimes images dancing reason finds ways

sometimes scenes connecting 

sometimes what we hears

sometimes from heart

 

sometimes images dancing reason finds ways 

sometimes scenes to sing about Heaven

sometimes what we think

sometimes do you imagine that O' shadow

 

sometimes understanding dreams

sometimes i can see it

sometimes i feels i am so inclined

sometimes delusional maybe so 

 

sometimes it might be

sometimes it should've all at once be i saw it veer away

sometimes it's in reality's lost time 

sometimes deep into all wild soulful eyes

 

sometimes jacket torn worn ragged

sometimes rugged

sometimes old ideas are

sometimes renewed

 

sometimes was of every bit s-patch visions sown into it

sometimes on paths trod

sometimes if ever-so-more

sometimes wilderness brighter

 

sometimes here underlines underneath

sometimes it takes or it gets you and me a-going 

sometimes getting it back

sometimes to times before 

 

sometimes from there this chaos

sometimes burning off

sometimes horizon's lost time

sometimes i fly-a-way far away 

 

a crystal palace enormous doors in there bells

sometimes becoming impossible a-must see

sometimes open handles broke away

then i can see it a kite a-surface wind's someplace

 

sometimes open fields

sometimes just cutting free loose

sometimes hanging in good looks

sometimes through and through

 

sometimes twisted vines

sometimes results

sometimes difficults

comes along passes holds onto by only Saga's door

 

sometimes perfect

sometimes a flower bush i caught

sometimes a feather

sometimes a fish

 

sometimes a rabbit

sometimes at rest

sometimes does enable above

sometimes below

 

sometimes nonsensical 

sometimes that

on a wooden blue dome box

on a wooden blue bridge crudely remade it

 

watching thinking walking over to see

at dusk on the blue lagune brung colorful somber

sometimes horizon's lost time

sometimes still became opening eyes

 

sometimes boyhood letters

sometimes binding edges

sometimes as love as dreams sends for

sometimes breadcrumbs or birds to read to

 

on paths inside them last times

sometimes doesn't exist or don't know where it is

sometimes here underground underneath

sometimes wants

 

sometimes hidden values

serene and silent pictures sometimes 

let us go moving things thought now sometimes 

counts on bricks boxes birds as so go waving walking by

 

sometimes dreaming foolish hearts it isn't 

sometimes just cause doing it

sometimes with knowing it

sometimes in a soft day to say hey

 

sometimes from dawning onwards

to dusk am i gonna keeping me up way too long 

sometimes becoming impossible a-must see 

sometimes i heads out abounds to go

 

sometimes through and through

in someways excuses this poem being too extreme

sometimes in a blue moon

sometimes in a blue pool reflects

 

at dusk on the blue lagune brung colorful somber

sometimes horizon's lost time

sometimes let's go there and then see

sometimes no answers i'm feeling

 

sometimes fresh and soft

sometimes like a river calm

sometimes like a ocean i don't bother

sometimes like the moon unglued 

 

sometimes at home

sometimes all drama

sometimes making of memories

sometimes i don't wanna

 

sometimes unseen

sometimes seen i can't stay

sometimes could've been

sometimes meant sorrows

 

sometimes how to stop them when wrong

sometimes suffering

sometimes struggling

sometimes turning page after page delightful

 

sometimes still becomes cool

sometimes slightly better see

sometimes be a poet

sometimes not fully that could be right

 

sometimes where is that ending standing here on

sometimes not yet when there is still 

sometimes a crystal palace enormous doors in there bells

sometimes cold swimming holes in my shoes 

 

sometimes a descent

sometimes at last times 

sometimes no answers i'm feeling

sometimes just wildly revealing

 

sometimes a wanting of some more in it i'm willing

sometimes turns over front cover

sometimes awhile i'm rapidly walking

sometimes i finds in senses almost tastes full 

 

sometimes to long dust blew thru

sometimes true true heart is out of air

sometimes anywhere

sometimes like a river soft o'er leaves

 

sometimes said so let's us go but pines at 

a-surface i feels some kind of peace leaves me

i know it's going to be fine

i know it's going to get better

 

i told you another poem

sometimes more real stars

sometimes seashells

sometimes teardrops if we falls

 

sometimes shields left

sometimes transparent

sometimes nothing much

sometimes things check me out

 

sometimes mountains and caves

sometimes miles aways

sometimes inner journeys taken

sometimes awhiles i'm rapidly walking

 

sometimes slightly better see

sometimes be a poet

sometimes not fully that could be right

sometimes still became cool with that 

 

sometimes breezy

sometimes open fields 

then i can see it a kite surfing wind's someplace

sometimes don't you know

 

those troubles of regaining outta all things cloudy 

sometimes how to confuse you when living

sometimes all eyes are aspired

sometimes dripping rain

 

sometimes rolling

sometimes down off

sometimes relief from sometimes 

comes along passes holds onto by only Saga's door

 

sometimes to a-new painting on 

sometimes spaces that speaks compelingly to us

sometimes just plainly

sometimes disorderly

 

sometimes patterns new lines

what is it all and all sharing in altered states

sometimes through and through

sometimes in long walks going going gone

 

sometimes way back

sometimes crossing tracks

sometimes it's alright

sometimes in thoughts online

 

sometimes it's a-magical flowing stick

sometimes i take on a blue bus ride

seeing you reading big into stars it was cosmic

sometimes i viewed the flame blue

 

was sat down once as wishes are continuous still

sometimes off edges i reaches

to bang it out and nail it down

the whole while building upon high a dream

 

sometimes a blue dome box 

sometimes a blue bridge crudely remade it 

at the dusk on the blue lagune

sometimes horizon's lost time

 

yet smile on warmly on all while getting there

sometimes a muse in me

sometimes a maze truly

sometimes a puzzle usaully

 

i haven't said anything really

sometimes hadn' taken it up

sometimes emptiness brokeness too deep

it's up there though i take it to air

 

sun shiny on gaint dandilions i'm happier now

sometimes within fables unguided made it

sometimes been shaded bending my mind back

sometimes in songs

 

sometimes in poems

sometimes sang in light open handles broke away

wherever the blade of grass is broken 

sometimes very beaten but not now

 

sometimes i befell softly onto every word

sometimes i heads out abounds to go

sometimes i remember around

sometimes slightly better see

 

sometimes be a poet

sometimes not fully that could be right

sometimes i know it

sometimes i don't i'm very far

 

not so much now i'm rapidly walking glowing after

sometimes true true heart is out of air

composition getting there where are you going

sometimes through and through

 

sometimes rough within without

a-product inside is next make it beautiful

sometimes off edges i reach

sometimes i fly-a-way far out

 

against to kick up another brick in the sidewalk dense

sometimes still became strong on beams O' pretty good stream

sometimes i painted great a blue coat

sometimes been branded without memory of a memory

 

sometimes holds by lines of fables don't forget

almost unto the O' desert trail O' chance is known 

sometimes been shaded thristy for another flood

sometimes spirits never can tell

 

sometimes nothing much

sometimes things check me out

sometimes mountains and caves

sometimes forest stirring up

 

sometimes for that's the best as i believes it today

sometimes a strange day

sometimes another paradise

sometimes going good could

 

sometimes with world a purpose

sometimes never sure i followed out

sometimes a flower bush i caught

sometimes O' changes known still became are same

 

sometimes a fish

sometimes a feather

sometimes a rabbit

sometimes at rest

 

sometimes does enable above

sometimes below

sometimes nonsensible

sometimes that

 

sometimes still became opening eyes

sometimes boyhood letters

sometimes binding edges

sometimes as love as dreams sends for

 

sometimes breadcrumbs or birds to read

on paths outside of last times

sometimes just dosn't know where it is

sometimes there underlines underneath

 

hidden values serene and silent pictures

oh don't stop talking what's your story here hurry

sometimes still became set to abstract in pain

sometimes sad love so lovely 

 

sometimes is indeed

sometimes a masterpiece

forever yours if i deplore for 

a raindrop lands i gives thanks to joy was sad

 

forever glad covers you covers me

sometimes on thee farewell weeping side

sometimes carried easy

sometimes open handles broke away

 

very well

on ends

on odds 

whole tree

 

sometimes as will lasts me

sometimes through and through

on each every limb climbs scrambles around blew thru

sometimes whole life

 

sometimes through and through

counts on bricks boxes birds as it go 

waking waving walking forever a candle lit flickers

onto final steps back to free form 

 

sometimes all the way out there floating by

gentle gleaming in a stream rushing by

sometimes in sky

sometimes in air

 

cold swim holes in my shoes by days widening 

gazing sometimes in poems in pockets melts

all full sometimes are something else

sometimes in up-words

 

sometimes down-words twirling

sometimes wants

i know it's going to be fine

i know it's going to get better

 

sometimes i think

sometimes i am

sometimes slightly better see

sometimes be a poet 

 

  

 

 

 

Reviews

[Sapphire Naylor]

Try shortening the poem. Most readers will become extremely overwhelmed with all the information and the length that they will not wish to continue. I would suggest splitting the poem into parts.