Life without You

Life without you, 

Pangs me deep inside.

I can’t find time to sleep,

As all my thoughts collide.

I'm drowning in your absence,

Sinking in the sea of regret.

I can’t find the right words,

Without making myself upset.

Life without you,

Leaves me upside down.

I’m constantly thinking of you,

As my sadness piles in mounds.

Regret is getting heavy,

For my shoulders to bear.

I am sorry for my actions,

And for treating you unfair.

Life without you,

Will never been the same.

It took one minute to hurt you,

But I’ve spend years with the pain.

My soul has the scars,

Of all that I’ve been through.

Life is not the same,

Living it...without you.

Reviews

[MagiCrystal]

The deep emotion in this words.. are so deep and your flow is superb.

[deeps]

This is so amazing!
I relly enjoyed this, it has alot of emotion in this.
Wonderful imagery as well. Very well written.