I Miss You Again

Thoughts are flooding me,
With memories of when.
As I lay my head,
On my pillow again.
Thoughts reverberate,
Back in my mind.
I haven’t missed you like this,
In quite a long time.

It’s been a long journey,
A journey of tears.
What seems like a while,
Has really been years.
I can’t tell you what it is,
I really don’t know.
What pangs this old heart,
Allowing sadness to grow.

I’m plagued with the memory
Of your infectious smile.
As I toss and turn...sifting,
Through my mental files. 
My sorrow has awoken,
With memories of when.
Tormenting my soul,
As I miss you again.

Reviews

[Creepy Swine Guy]

I like this. You express grief and longing without being sappy and your meter is much better and more tight than the meter I see in many poems that you read. Very well executed.

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... profound ... poetic ... mellifluous ... melancholic ... beautiful verse ...

[Tate Morgan]

Time has that way iof fooling us doesnt it

[just rose.]

I think the rhymes here are really well done, and you can really feel the longing and the sadness in the poem.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Raul, this one is great ...I enjoyed the expressiveness, and the emotive quality of the write...Keep the creative pen flowing..Sunflower

[Jessica Mai]

This is beautifully written and just a lovely poem.