Guiding Light

Haiku

Troubled waters wait,

For the guidance of the sun:

Mists praise Thy return.

Reviews

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... a spiritual title ... and a spiritual haiku ... i found a universe of sorrow followed by solace in the first line ... i found greater hope in the second line ... it's patience and resilience reinforced with exquisite poetry ... and the last line is sheer genius ... what an image ... amazingly profound and skillful verse ...

[samantha]

lovely and short i loved it.

[just rose.]

What's so interesting here is the personification of the water and the authoritative/benevolent characterization of the sun suggested by the word "guidance." You've done a lot here in very few syllables.

[A.Lee]

I like how well this one flows.

[Another Relic]

Nice one raul, this one flows so nicely in it's phrases. It's like they were meant to be together in just that way.

[Thomas Fleet]

Hey, Raul! :]
What a wonderful haiku...I'm trying to pick a favorite part,
but it's just so hard. :P
The last line is very vivid and powerful..."Mists praise Thy return."
Good stuff, thanks for sharing! :D