Forlorn Winds
A Poem by
Raul Moreno
Haiku
Somber harmony,
Melancholic symphony:
Winter sonata.
© 2010 Raul Moreno
Reviews
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Posted 14 Years Ago
Ooh, this was nice!
I liked the (I suppose) unintentional rhyme in the first two lines. It added a lot more impact with the final line~ The rhyme and then mention of a sonata, very musical.
Great job!
Posted 14 Years Ago
Ooh, this was nice!
I liked the (I suppose) unintentional rhyme in the first two lines. It added a lot more impact with the final line~ The rhyme and then mention of a sonata, very musical.
Great job!
Raul,
Very expressive way of putting the mood that can happen when trapped inside in the winter months...Great descripive work..Sunflower..
Posted 14 Years Ago
Raul,
Very expressive way of putting the mood that can happen when trapped inside in the winter months...Great descripive work..Sunflower..
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Added on April 5, 2010
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