Forlorn Winds

Forlorn Winds

A Poem by Raul Moreno
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Haiku

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Somber harmony,
Melancholic symphony:
Winter sonata.

© 2010 Raul Moreno


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Oh yes...~

Posted 14 Years Ago


Ooh, this was nice!
I liked the (I suppose) unintentional rhyme in the first two lines. It added a lot more impact with the final line~ The rhyme and then mention of a sonata, very musical.
Great job!

Posted 14 Years Ago


Raul,

Very expressive way of putting the mood that can happen when trapped inside in the winter months...Great descripive work..Sunflower..

Posted 14 Years Ago



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Added on April 5, 2010
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