Citrus Evening

Haiku

Mango horizon,

Grapefruit sun sinks in the sea:

Apricot sunset.

Reviews

[Vincent Esprit FMI]

Raul this is an excellent piece of art. It is tropical and exotic! congrats

[Tina Kline]

Wow. Very creative and so very lovely the picture your words paint!

[Nancy Lee Shrader]

Beautiful, just beautiful!

[AbsentElements]

This has very interesting imagery, the way you use fruit as the details makes it a very...compelling poem. Citrus evening really is the best title for this. Very Nice Write.

[Sunflower/Sara Kendrick]

Great tasty write...Your friend request went in my junk mail who knows why...I approved at about 8:43 AM DST USA...Sunflower..