Tasteful Waters
A Poem by
Raul Moreno
Haiku
The mandarin surf,
Reflects the pomelo sun:
Flavors for the eye.
© 2010 Raul Moreno
Reviews
Short, but genious. Love it!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Awesome! This has taste, sight and smell and paints such a lovely picture, so very lovely!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Awesome! This has taste, sight and smell and paints such a lovely picture, so very lovely!
Another masterful painting with words! Beautiful and outstanding!
Posted 15 Years Ago
Another masterful painting with words! Beautiful and outstanding!
1 of 1 people found this review constructive.
cool poem
Posted 15 Years Ago
cool poem
This is a beautifully described 'tasteful sunset'; a masterpiece that strikes the mind and expands upon the readers' imagination.
I'm there, watching the sunset beyond the tangerine sky.
-James
Posted 15 Years Ago
This is a beautifully described 'tasteful sunset'; a masterpiece that strikes the mind and expands upon the readers' imagination.
I'm there, watching the sunset beyond the tangerine sky.
-James
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Added on March 28, 2010
Last Updated on April 6, 2010
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Nature
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