Metallic Morn
A Poem by
Raul Moreno
based on metallic colors.
Sleepy auburn hills, Wake to the warm touch of gold: Under pewter skies.
© 2010 Raul Moreno
Reviews
Nice job, you give it a visionistic feel with the use of the right words.
Posted 14 Years Ago
You're really good at creating so much imagery in so few words. I like this a lot, especially the first line, "Sleepy auburn hills,".
Thanks for sharing. :)
Posted 14 Years Ago
You're really good at creating so much imagery in so few words. I like this a lot, especially the first line, "Sleepy auburn hills,".
Thanks for sharing. :)
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Added on March 25, 2010
Last Updated on March 25, 2010
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Haiku ,
Nature
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